Personally don’t care about the Arthur/Druid plot at all. Wish we would just get back to Vikings plot already. It also just feels so silly that he’s going for treasure by himself, how is he gonna get away with anything substantial? He can only take what he and the girls can carry. If he got a cart or something he would be chased down. Should leave and send word to Ragnar with the ships so they can sneak in and sack it and get more than what one man can carry. Have his bonded or the princess show him a hidden way inside the castle or something.
I must’ve missed how it said he was escaping. But if it’s like a wagon or something then he should get run down by a bunch gaurds on horses. I don’t think the raiding party can beat the whole castle, but I think if he found a passage and he and the girl pretending to be a servant, memorized the gaurd rotation and planed a route to the treasury, he should get better results then doing it by himself. And the sailing being unreliable makes him seem overly dumb for staying alone. I get he’s a over confident teen but the only plan when he stayed was to wait until you hear rumors of your people to go to them over a unfamiliar land? With a bunch of loot you have to take too? Overall I like the story I just don’t like this arc. The beginning was good with the farm and the werewolves, I just don’t like the castle part. I think the princesses wanting to leave with him after like a week or two is silly, especially the one that knows he’s a killer. I think his kid being Arthur’s heir isn’t needed, we haven’t even gotten to the Mikaleson curse on his daughter yet just hinted at it. The solo journey is just dragging out now Imo.
TheManUnderTheBed:Plus you’re making the assumption he’s going to carry it out of the castle by foot which is wrong. The way he’s going to leave has already been mentioned
Loved the chapter bro 👍 And I loved the small moment of identity crisis thorfinn was having just now, it sorta shows he’s changing in a lot of ways because he’s doing something most people from those times do, learning new ways different from their own culture and adapting to it, it seems to me that thorfinn is more trying to live up to the typical status quo for a Viking and not really trying to live in his ‘own’ way, or thinking with his own ideals, then again he’s a fourteen year old who’s never been introduced to any other ideals but his own culture so it’s to be expected Also, I know it’s unlikely but I’m hoping there’s a chance at some sort of resolution between thorfinn and Eowin and they can have a fresh start
Thanks for the chapter and I hope my ideas have helped you written in previous chapters. In the end I don't understand why become more moral, I think it would be better to be more ruthless and calculating. As a demi-god I always thought he should be superior to a peak human physically and even mentally. I hope you will make him understand that there are no wrong methods or means to achieve a goal. I hope I'm wrong but Eowyn and his son will almost certainly be his enemies.