Author here. So i am currently going through my book to check how it is from the eyes of readers and so far it seems fine. But, i wanna here anout the book from you guys so if you can, please leave a comment telling me what to do
We didn't get a introduction from the author of camillia and her abilities also who's pov are we reading this from because it seems like the author is talking to us instead of us reading a book and even then the author's writing seems like he isn't sure of what he's writing pls work on that
First off don't u think it would have been better to describe the forest and the creatures that situate themselves in the forest in the description of when Adam started walking in the forest if you ever thought of adding that part to see the his pov
