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Comments of chapter undefined of Silent Resolve

Daoisth1hP0X
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We're not told there's a time lapse in the story and we're supposed to automatically know as the readers is one thing wrong and how why is it so shocking for her at the end when she realized what's going on, and we need to also see the relationship between them grow otherwise the readers won't be able to understand whether they're friends or in a romantic relationship

FugiTee
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The time-lapse was abrupt and sudden, I apologize for that, I will do my best in later chapters to keep the story going at a steady pace that doesn't leave out too many things and gives the reader at least an image of what is going on