Comments of chapter undefined of HP: The Big Bad Wolf
HP: The Big Bad Wolf
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1st Answer to the first question: The problem is not if the MC is very violent but if he is just a violent guy, I would like to see a good balance between violence and intelligence, strategy, deception... In short, a character less Vegeta (Dragon Ball) and more Aizen (Bleach) 2nd Answer to the second question The Marauders were idiots yes but they were idiots more because of Dumbledore's guidance/neglect! It is not possible to exempt him from the influence he exerts on the boys, whether by guiding their ideologies or by his tactical approval of all the "pranks" they did, if it were another director he would certainly have already taken action against their actions. 3rd Answer to the third question I'm not interested in future chapters
I like the fanfic, just hope nothing goes mid-outrageous Like there is a line- nothing outrageous is when a fic is good, too outrageous pumps the adrenaline in the fic, mid outrageous ruins the fic. let me give an example- snape ignoring Lily is nothing outrageous, so its cool. snape marrying lily at this point in the plot is mid outrageous, so it ruins the story. NOW snape killing lily is too outrageous, and it will either make the fic or break it. You need to tread mostly on nothing outrageous, and add some too outrageous, and hope for the best
