Comments of chapter undefined of Not the Last Airbender

I'm not going to say that the chapters after the first were all useless, but honestly, it was much better to continue the story and show his story up to that point in small sections with the important parts, his motivation, etc. It's very boring to read and I'm going to let it accumulate for at least a month before I come back. If possible, fix spelling errors and strange punctuations. ( Google translator)

Why a rapier. aren’t they too long and fragile. Sure it’s a fast attacking wepon, but has way less maneuverability than a short sword. Also rapiers so too little damage and there is no way a rapier is getting through any armor. So it is only effective against unarmored opponents. a rope dart would be a much better wepon for the MC. it would fit much more with his highly maneuverable and agile fighting style. It would also make much more damage than a rapier.

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Thanks for the chaper

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Thanks for the chapther

Nice chapter.