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Comments of chapter undefined of Legacy of Harry Potter

Lozz
LozzLv4Lozz

if the cloak doesn't do sound, smell, hearing, please have him learn some spells for that. Sneaking around yet people can still hear you? Ms Norris can still smell him? Seems... not redundant, but kinda dumb.

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PhoenixSoul_07
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You are the writer. This fanfic is yours. If there are loopholes or contradictions, even I would point it out. But that's not to criticise but it's just a way for you to improves. The points you pointed out, to be honest, it's logical. Readers do wonder about stuff and comment, that is mainly to understand Authors POV. Any other illogical unreasonable comments you should ignore.

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jess_weston
jess_westonLv4jess_weston

all I can say to hopefully reduce the complaints is that this is an AU. Things that J.K. Rowling wrote in her canonical story, don't really apply here. the writer has taken some creative liberties and changed the Harry Potter world we know. we won't always like or agree with the changes but the writer has reasons for altering them. we have this huge modding community that does just that to the games we know and love. as you know some of the mods are also great, some honorable mentions, and some just down right bad they should be destroyed. All I'm saying is take it easy with the harsh feedback.

RoseAmber
RoseAmberLv14RoseAmber

Thanks

Akisu
AkisuLv13Akisu

Everything else is reasonable, the cloak restriction of not being able to cast magic while under it is weird though.

Isekailogy
IsekailogyLv4Isekailogy

i hope ron will be ostracized by all of hogwarts and he will become something of a pariah because of his stupidity.

sohrab_sad
sohrab_sadLv1sohrab_sad

I think it is childish to have so many lordships as Goblins would have confisicated any unclaimed volt that is remain inactive more than lets say 200 years and Peverell volt probably merged with potter volt, plus, gaining control of school should not be possible the founders probably put countermeasures to stop any petulant brat which would be their descendent to take control of school from responsible adults. there are evidence about my climes. for example the poverty of Gaunt family which were the Slytherin dependents.

Hush19
Hush19Lv15Hush19

Love the story - don’t listen to people and just keep chuggin