Comments of chapter undefined of The Immortal in Star Wars

If the MC is going to take a trip through several universes, I think it should be weaker universes since universes like DC and Marvel are too powerful for the MC to be a great power in them, unless of course it's in universes like the MCU and DCU which are weaker than average universes for these multiverses, do you think the MC could visit the mortal kombat universe? After all, I can at least see some similarities, such as the force being a titan and the MC being her champion god, protector of her kingdom, in the same way that raiden is for the earthly realm

Alright here is what I got: Nothing is true, everything is permitted. ;P Through Knowledge, I gain wisdom. Through Wisdom, I am grateful. I refract the Light, I absolve the Dark. (I witness the Kaleidoscope) I humble myself before the Force.

He should go to Doctor Who. Limitless could be good for the NZT or whatever it’s called. X-Men’s another one (Phoenix force?). Star Trek wouldn’t be bad.

and if you do go to stronger universes please slowly ramp up his power level till Sufficient before hand

is There a Major timeskip coming up.??

😂, this chapter was, basically "Kids that's how I met your mother"

Thanks for the chapter Here's a couple ideas: There's no power, there purpose. There is purpose, there is path. There's no path, there is side. There is side, there is light or dark. There's no light or dark, there is life. There is life, there is the force. Though life I listen Though listening I understand Though understanding I ask Through asking I change Though changing I transcend. What I was trying to say is that one should not be lost in the power that the force grants and always have a purpose in mind for that power. How your purpose makes your path and that path lead you to one side the good or the bad Is this one I try to say there is no good or bad but life is all of them and so is the force. In the following I tried to reflect the mc journey with the force, how in life he learned to listen and with listening he understood the force and then asking it to do, he changes and transcend and become equal in nature to the force Sorry if There is grammar errors English is not my first language

Just saw this story as a passing glance and decided to take a look. Now I’ve read to here and a little sad I’ve caught up. This story is awesome man and I can’t wait to see how it continues and what’ll happen next. Is he gonna have a proper name or just get called The Immortal or just Immortal?

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Waifu force when?

Perhaps you can use the Philosophy of; The Yin-Yang: Symbol of Non-duality, Oneness and Interconnectedness. Or The Prism: 1) a solid geometric figure whose two end faces are similar, equal, and parallel rectilinear figures, and whose sides are parallelograms. 2) a glass or other transparent object in prism form, especially one that is triangular with refracting surfaces at an acute angle with each other and that separates white light into a spectrum of colors. 3) used figuratively with reference to the clarification or distortion afforded by a particular viewpoint.

Thanks for the chapter.

I can't wait to see the moment when one of his children will cross paths with the original Jedai order. It should be funny to see all their beliefs undermined, they might even see this new species as dangerous since they don't only use the light side of the force.

From all star wars fanfic i ever read,this is the best.10/10👌🏻 Keep it up author! This is the best fanfic i ever read♥️

It gets corny having someone constantly talk about how great they are and how great their creations are, regardless if it’s true or not. Maybe do more POV, we already know he’s OP. We can get others coming to that realization. Or even doubt his existence for him to show up and shatter their plans… maybe not even him, people he’s “guided” along the way.. Just a thought

keep up with the great work it's amazing

Thanks for chapter

I like this code of the Gray Jedi, which is the closest thing to the MC's path: "There is no emotion, there is peace. There is no ignorance, there is knowledge. There is no passion, there is serenity. There is no chaos, there is harmony. There is no death, there is the Force."