Comments of chapter undefined of I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm

I think the story needs to slow down a little. His powerscaling is already getting out of control and he's only been cultivating for a year. The author seems to be aiming at taking this into the higher realms, so if he isn't careful with pacing, he's going to end up with massive differences of two or more major realms every fight, which just gets ridiculous.