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  • surloch
    surloch2d
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    I'm sort of interested in where this might go, but the author and translations writing and consistency is so terrible it is hard to read. Names, genders and attribution are just messed up. It was hard to even tell at the beginning if the scythe was attacking the MC, or helping and then it turns out it was his ability all along. Also all this secrecy around his skills and golden finger just makes every event confusing as you can't tell what is intentional from what is accidental. Just a jumbled mess.

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 Disappearance of the Ghost Domain_1
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    Divine Beast Creator
    Eastern · Salted fish on a fishing rod
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    Not a fan of ghost cultivation, hopefully he doesn't use it himself. Also really annoyed at how much he is hiding from his now fiance. Sure, she hides just as much from him, but he has never given her anything in return so that is her right. Until he can repay her favours he should at least try and see if he can help her, instead of just selfishly taking endlessly from her for no returns.

    Ch 96 Chapter 93: Unmatched in the World, Ninth Level of Profound Heart Realm_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
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    I still feel like he is getting too strong too quickly, he will be fighting immortals and sect leaders soon and he'll barely be in his thirties.

    Ch 67 Listing Remarks_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    Finally maybe a technique he can give back to the girl, I doubt she has this one.

    Ch 59 Chapter 57 True Combat Technique Great Perfection_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    He's starting to get cultivation PTSD lol

    Ch 46 Chapter 44: Divine Nurturing Sword Qi, Sword in the Eye_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    Ok I can try to push past all the harem but I'm really drawing a line in the sand on how stupid he is. Also not telling his wife, not being honest with his basically adoptive father etc. Just can't keep going even with free reading, so it's a drop from me here.

    Ch 43 Chapter 43: Nightfall Organization Takes the Blame_1
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    From the Heavens Descended an Immortal Sister
    Eastern · Plastic Shell
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    He really needs to come clean about his alchemy talent, otherwise they can't protect him effectively. He is much like what he criticised his fiance about, too naive and not even realising his own circumstances.

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: Knowing Nothing (Second Update)_1
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    From the Heavens Descended an Immortal Sister
    Eastern · Plastic Shell
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  • surloch
    surloch3d
    Commented

    Ok so this is clearly going super harrm route. Not sure to drop or soldier on for a few more chapters. I have free reading for a bit so I'll five it a chance but if I had to use FP I'm prettu sure right here is where most people would drop as this wasn't tagged harem.

    Ch 27 Chapter 27: Malice_1
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    From the Heavens Descended an Immortal Sister
    Eastern · Plastic Shell
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  • surloch
    surloch5d
    Commented

    I hope he goes back to his ancestral village soon. I feel like there might be some secrets or an inheritance there. He clearly has a bloodline with those mental abilities even before the start of the system.

    Ch 42 Chapter 36: The Bigger the Storm, the Higher the Pig Flies_2
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    The King of Beast Trainers
    Urban · Sounding Stream
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  • surloch
    surloch8d
    Commented

    I mean, a sword weilding dog is super scientific lol

    Ch 20 Chapter 18 Sword-Carrying Dog_1
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    The King of Beast Trainers
    Urban · Sounding Stream
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  • surloch
    surloch8d
    Commented

    I hope he comes clean with this sister of his and pools resources. Otherwise it seems stupid that they will effectively be paying double for all information and resources. I really hope her spider doesn't need a grass type for example. They should also group up a few times even if just to train synergy.

    Ch 17 Chapter 16 Fang Lan's Message_2
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    The King of Beast Trainers
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  • surloch
    surloch8d
    Commented

    I hope she is safe.

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 Return_1
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    The King of Beast Trainers
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  • surloch
    surloch9d
    Commented

    Well the rewards seem to be completely random, even if he can swap for lower tier items it might be worth it if they are more practical and useful to him in the short term.

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 Infinite City_1
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    The King of Beast Trainers
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  • surloch
    surloch12d
    Commented

    What an idiotic sect. Luckily it seems Ya Ya is not ordinary and likely they will both outgrow this place and leave. Someone who ages slowly is the perfect person to accompany a turtle too.

    Ch 34 Chapter 033 Photo Keepsake (Revised)_2
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    Don't Mess with that Turtle
    Eastern · Meibu cc
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  • surloch
    surloch17d
    Commented

    I'm kinda surprised he hasn't gone out to try and find the other inheritance from that ancient sect while he had all this time up his sleeve.

    Ch 35 Chapter 33 Fang Family Trio_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
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  • surloch
    surloch19d
    Commented

    I think the story needs to slow down a little. His powerscaling is already getting out of control and he's only been cultivating for a year. The author seems to be aiming at taking this into the higher realms, so if he isn't careful with pacing, he's going to end up with massive differences of two or more major realms every fight, which just gets ridiculous.

    Ch 31 Chapter 29 Stronger Than Everyone_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch19d
    Commented

    And so the ripples will spread, the future will start to be more and more uncertain after this.

    Ch 26 Chapter 24: The Astonishing 32 Swords!_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch19d
    Commented

    I hope he creates a good one, but I feel like the palace may have other ideas. It could already be his lifebound treasure. Also he doesn't seem to have any particular affinity for the sword, just going with the flow based on his current techniques. This is something that will accompany him for life, it probably can't be perfected unless your heart is really in it.

    Ch 18 Chapter 16 White Rainbow Evasion Technique Great Perfection, Beginning Spiritual Refinement_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch19d
    Commented

    I wonder if he will try to learn it, only to find it is incomplete and ferret out some conspiracy / hidden backstory.

    Ch 15 Chapter 13: Nine Heavens Azure Thunder Sword Formation_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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  • surloch
    surloch19d
    Commented

    I see she is taking the traditional MC path, she has too many secrets to stand out at the top. Better to be the person standing behind the king from the shadows.

    Ch 14 Chapter 12 Initiation and Direct Transmission_1
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    I Became An Immortal On Mortal Realm
    Eastern · Let Me Laugh
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