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Comments of chapter undefined of Ultimate Being from the Tokonosu City

Jerry070
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Okay, I like it. I know people don't like this, but, really its normal for me. I find chinese cultivation bs more annoying than this. In this, its showing a guy who was evil and now is trying to be good. Its absolutely perfect he would think things like this, even compare his actions with good people he have met or observed. I can't say for all but people in webnovel really like villians and mc's who kill left and right. They are expecting everyone to do it with their MCs [not all but quite a few]. Anyways, I find this perfectly nice except for the fact that mc talk more but plot is shown less. Like author should also show the scenes happening in length. Its like I can remember more of him talking to himself [thoughts and self talk], and less things happing in plot including his conversation to others. Not that its exact number, but for me after reading I felt like this. The way author is writing is perfect for me, it just needs a little more plot, and a little less self talk [just a little amount]. If people are talking about this then well I think they are correct in my view. Also, with his trying to be good from bad guy, author should change plot a little more from main plot. Like not following the plot because mc doesn't need to as he has super powers now. Just my ranting, no need to pay attention if it felt useless, or a suggestion if you feel its good enough. Anyways, nice job and thanks for the chapter.

ISuckAtNaming
ISuckAtNamingLv13ISuckAtNaming

man your input is really good. if i write a story i want your type of people who comment to my story. its pointing what is good and what is bad in the story in clear and non hurtful way.

Mirio_kun
Mirio_kunLv1Mirio_kun

The amount of time he said being good person and such is just too much. Not to mention there's just too much nonsense. It feels like just to increase word count.

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Infinit
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Uchiha_Madara_sama
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Saeko please.

Ballad
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Honestly I've always liked Saeko and Rei the most. 10/10s definitely

lord_Azathoth
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Bob_Uchiha_XD
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Rei

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white_spaghetti
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Thanks for the chapter

DeathDevil_33
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Thanks for the chapter.

Gargamel72
Gargamel72Lv6Gargamel72

Thanks for the chapters

Wikramadani
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Thanks for the chapter

Maybonnie
MaybonnieLv2Maybonnie

Hahaha You be green

Hammer_Black
Hammer_BlackLv4Hammer_Black

Thank you For the chapter

Maradilue
MaradilueLv13Maradilue

👍

Arthuremberheart
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Honestly, I don't know why you made an MC with this "HYPOCRITE" character

One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14One_Singularity

Tftc

Evoler
EvolerLv3Evoler

Thanks for the chapter!!!! As always Isao being a Goooooood Person xD hahahaha

Hanyang_0w0
Hanyang_0w0Lv4Hanyang_0w0

Yes

Luizz_Ricardo
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👍👍