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Comments of chapter undefined of Spells and Super Soldiers (HP/MCU) (SI)

ProSpect
ProSpectLv4ProSpect

you should improve your grammar, but otherwise its a decent story

ErozothDraeor
ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Really don't like this chapter. All the "You fcked up, but I saved you in secret" bs, one time I understand but now its everything, make your MC more of a failure, maybe we didn't get it. On top of that he is so stupid he is still nervous, if she wanted to deal with him, it would have been months ago, not helping him hide.

Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799
Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799Lv1Ichigo_Kurosaki_1799

Honestly hate it when mcs go to there to learn magic its way overdone marvel has other sorcerers from every region and yet every auther makes thier mc go there even worse than that they always have the mc be at the mercy of the ancient one and cases like this where she holds the fact that she can kill the mc over thier head but is giving them mercy its has made me loath her

Shadow_R3y3s
Shadow_R3y3sLv4Shadow_R3y3s

WereWolf1987
WereWolf1987Lv12WereWolf1987

binge read all 8 chapters and so far its very interesting ^^ Looking forward to the next chapters ^^ and thank you

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Thanks for the chapter

T_M_C_A_W
T_M_C_A_WLv4T_M_C_A_W

thanks for the chapter