Night_wizard
Creating spells with overly complex physics themes out of nowhere doesn't make much sense. There should be some difficulty at least.
The auther is doing alot of telling instead of showing the story is basically a summary with us being informed of the events happening and thier conclusion without actually reading about it as it happens also the mc is apperently a magic god accidently starting occulemency and moving dumbledores spells when a first year id not mind it if this is just mc being extremely talented in magic but if this is just some forced plot for things to go mcs way i wont have much hope for this story
MC will make a superior version of the serum right ? Also MC Needs to get ' Absolute Gene-Lock ' to make sure there is No Copying/ Cloning/ Stealing/ Studying/ Experimenting/ Children/ Etc.... and perhaps others Magical Bloodlines to be added to his own slowly in the future from All around the World/ Universe to somehow Evolve himself in all [Body/ Mind/ Soul/ Magic] . đ„đ„đ„ Maybe have a goal of becoming a dimension Lord like the Trinity if Vishanti and Cytorackk. đ„đ„đ„ đđđ