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Comments of chapter undefined of Spider-Man- The Successful One

Spider-Man- The Successful One

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lalithkumar
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are you writing a marvel story or romance story in two chapters there is nothing much than these two flirting

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Anonny_Anonymous
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This romance is way too forced. I wish you let the story develop more before introducing MJ or other romantic interests. He’s literally in a new world. A comic book world at that. That’s MUCH more interesting than this half-baked high school dating. 99% of readers would prefer to read about actual comic book world stuff instead of a dating simulator.

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Chaar
ChaarLv14Chaar

You made Mary Jane incredibly likable man.

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Void_Man24
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I just discover this story, and I'm need MORE! And I like how you write MJ!

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Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5Dieudonner_17

Huh Im being slapped in the face bit by bit Well we’ll see

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WarMachine78
WarMachine78Lv14WarMachine78

Thanks for the chapter

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weslley
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Chaar
ChaarLv14Chaar

If you have a Patreon with more chapter, I’ll gladly pay for it.

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Alex_Delgado
Alex_DelgadoLv4Alex_Delgado

please let him learn some magic

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