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Comments of chapter undefined of Potter's luck

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Exelia
ExeliaLv4Exelia

Thanks for the story but this is as far I go. as it could be painful to read .Bye. ✌️😁

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ggswart_510
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Thanks for the chapter but I just wanted to point out some naming mistake it's diagon alley and is the sorting hat

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CR077
CR077Lv4CR077

Thanks for the chapters, can’t wait to see where you go with this story lol

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TheSnap
TheSnapLv4TheSnap

This is pretty good. Only a few major flaws but only on things with synonyms so I understood what was meant

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callylloyd
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Enter, stranger, but take heed Of what awaits the sin of greed, For those who take, but do not earn, Must pay most dearly in their turn, So if you seek beneath our floors A treasure that was never yours, Thief, you have been warned, beware Of finding more than treasure there.

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DuchessKolslaw
DuchessKolslawLv2DuchessKolslaw

So blood traitor as in the modern sense as in muggle lovers ect.. or blood traitor as in there ancestors sold wizards out to the church to be burned.

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Woutt
WouttLv2Woutt

So everyone knows morgana is alive? Weird but okay

Faibani
FaibaniLv1Faibani

its absolute aweful the grammer and words it is disgusting to read

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Sabaroth_zarkiel
Sabaroth_zarkielLv4Sabaroth_zarkiel

Thank you for the chapter