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I mean this fic is no that bad. I think It doesn't reserve de 4.1 rating. The interactions in The chat are pretty funny. But i think that we want to se some delopment character for severus and his development with Lili. Keep going
Develop if he forget her or something like that, the majority of bad ratings is because the MC is a "Simp". I'm don't care if he is a Simp or not
_Monarch:what's there to develop between mc and Lily? i hope it will be narcissa x mc