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Comments of chapter undefined of Konoha: The Template System

Timsah
TimsahLv4Timsah

he should redirect Seveb Tails rampage to Sarutobi clan compound area

IdiotsEverywhere
IdiotsEverywhereLv3IdiotsEverywhere

MC finally gonna do something about Danzo. Author, if that man survives by some way, if MC is struck by lightning or something that lets Danzo get away, I don't care for the reason Danzo survives or escapes, Izanagi or whatever, I'm dropping this story then and there.

Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv13Raptor2244

Honestly if his family was stupid enough to believe that danzo wanted what's best for the village after wanting to release the ninetails (way way outside of danzo ability BTW) then they deserve whatever is going to happen to them. Earlier they were whining and throwing a fit about their reputation. Now they will have a reputation as kinslayers and the ones who released the ninetails upon the village.

Hot_mature_5km
Hot_mature_5kmLv3Hot_mature_5km

If danzo is so good here I don't understand how it's not hokage and how he lost in the war against Han if he was better at sealing jutsus than the uzumakys

MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1MARLENE_ANGEL

SARUTOBI WILL OF FIRE..HE LIGHT THE FIRE AND WATCH OTHER BURN

klostrez
klostrezLv14klostrez

making two biju berserak in Konoha is not only full of risk, it's also a bonker plan with full hole

DaoistcaqwL5
DaoistcaqwL5Lv4DaoistcaqwL5

My best bet, Danzo going to point all faults on MC family(and even him if he feels even more shameless) and considering her mother is part of Root, I doubt his sister and her father isn’t part of it at some point and should be neutralised, his was practically was orphan anyway with extra step so this shouldn’t be so hard

Korkyros
KorkyrosLv1Korkyros

This whole part of the story just seems like a useless reasoning to get rid of a emotionally distant family and to make Danzo relevant to me. The second part isn't important since there are any number of ways to make him a villain towards the MC while the first half makes little sense to me. His family is already emotionally detached from him and his mother seemed to be messed up in the head since she decided to attempt to kill him even when she seemed to love him in the chapter before. The father reminds me of Fugaku and the relationship with his sister could define the relationship I have with any of my siblings and that is solely because we don't share much common interests.

Fi3l
Fi3lLv14Fi3l

The MC is very bland and this whole story is starting to go down hill

MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1MARLENE_ANGEL

DANZO ONLY CARES ABOUT HIMSELF NOT THE VILLAGE,,, THAT EXCUSE

olympaforged
olympaforgedLv4olympaforged

all u care about is danzo meeting his end. put him down for good, no means of escaping as well. dude needs to go for real.

MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1MARLENE_ANGEL

REMEMBER THE EPISODE WHERE NARUTO AND SAKURA THOUGHT THE 3RD HOKAGE WAS WEAK AND DUMB KAKASHI BRAINWAHS SAID HE WAS STRONG

Gh0st00
Gh0st00Lv15Gh0st00

and it feels like some of this is being dragged out

MARLENE_ANGEL
MARLENE_ANGELLv1MARLENE_ANGEL

THE 3RD WAS WEAK BEACH ,,CLOWNS NEVER PUT FOOTH ON THE BATTLE FIELD WEAK CLOWN

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

No. Danzo couldn’t weaken a seal that was designed by Mito. That thing was tighter than even the one on Naruto. Naruto’s seal was designed to allow chakra to escape to slowly strengthen Naruto over time and allow him to access the 9 tails chakra. Kushina’s seal was locked incredibly tight. There’s no way in hell Danzo would have been able to weaken. I call forced plot.

Brent_6064
Brent_6064Lv4Brent_6064

I'm waiting if danzo survives I swear half of your reader will drop this.

Lordmoonlight
LordmoonlightLv5Lordmoonlight

I hate all of the family they where a waste of time

OkayRose
OkayRoseLv3OkayRose

Bro what even is this anymore?? Are you ever going to focus on the main character rather than glaze the Fourth Hokage and his wife every chapter? 0 character development so far

Gabriel_Franco_7066
Gabriel_Franco_7066Lv4Gabriel_Franco_7066

Please make it work. Please I like this fic ☹

Reiya9
Reiya9Lv4Reiya9

What trash

wolfgaminga
wolfgamingaLv13wolfgaminga

bye