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i don't dislike the idea, i just wish that when everyone knows the truth and apologize, he's just forgive them like nothing happened, the teacher is trying to destroy his future career without checking if he's changed from the alleged charges, and his classmates and future heroes just stood by and let that happen.
In chapter 17 you said that izuku felt that the teacher was watching what will happen. Lets start counting shall we, first after izuku entered Bakugo attacked him with explosion and started shouting (aizawa was outside listening),then before leaving the class Bakugo said "Later after school ,i will trash you in the ground like in the good old days" how is that the victim.How? Thanks for the great try at the start but i will drop here .
I was really liking this fanfic. Author if you're not planning on resolving this misunderstanding within next 10 chapters, I'm pretty sure many people would stop reading it. I know that it's your creation and you have every right to make it as you like but I doubt you could keep your motivation to write when people start hating your fanfic.
Hello, I really liked this book in the beginning, so I will try to be fair and give an honest review, I think that the book is salvegable if the last 3-4 chapters are rewritten because the amount of plot holes that have appeared in them is a lot as well as the actions some of the characters are taking seem uncharacteristic, idiotic and illogical, this makes for a low quality reading experience for the readers as you might as well call the characters xianxia young masters, anyway due to the previously stated reasons you may end up experiencing a drop in your reader base. This is purely advice and a summarised review of what the last couple of chapters felt like to read as well as possible actions to take regarding them, obviously you don’t need to care about my opinion or believe what I have written but I have seen a lot of authors/writers who seem to have a passion for their book stop writing because people stoped reading their book, so I hope you take into consideration what I have written and make a judgement on what type of writer you are and weather you care if people are reading your work or not.