Lernaean_
oh, ok, sorry for that.. it just, there's part that seems like it translated using Google translate or something.. or maybe you write the story in your native language and then translate it with translator(like google translate and the others)? if yes then that's also make sense..
Lernaean_:No, I'm just new and English is my second language, not very well mastered. That's why it can be a bit complicated to read đ