shinydecapod
Do you reread the chapters before you post them and think about how they fit and if anything in them is useless or doesn't make a lot of since. In the last chapter you have the MC say I'm going to use your body for science then he vaporizes him, ah what. Now your having him be like your bad Sky no experimenting on people how where going to kill us, are you maybe a secret writer for all those graphic novels that some one who was going to kill you can go free after they are beaten and beg for there lives, just for them to get back at you later. I mean the MC took wounder soldiers and turned them into his own killing weapons.