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Kingvio

Kingvio

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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1mth
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    Do you reread the chapters before you post them and think about how they fit and if anything in them is useless or doesn't make a lot of since. In the last chapter you have the MC say I'm going to use your body for science then he vaporizes him, ah what. Now your having him be like your bad Sky no experimenting on people how where going to kill us, are you maybe a secret writer for all those graphic novels that some one who was going to kill you can go free after they are beaten and beg for there lives, just for them to get back at you later. I mean the MC took wounder soldiers and turned them into his own killing weapons.

    Ch 68 Machine Man 66 Establishing a Country.
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    Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.
    Movies · TheMainPlagiaris
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio6mth
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    Why do these type of authors thank people need to explain there powers to others the other party it’s being like yes I’m a this and my powers are this and come from that just to get the others approval

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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio8mth
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    Suspecting you have something and coming right out and saying you have it are to completely different things. Next the higher ups will want info on his space, and you will have him be like let me tell you all about it.

    Ch 537 CH10 (532), Military (5)
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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio9mth
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    Author I hope your not being lazy whit the story now there is no way that after ever thing the MC has done and gone through that he would not put fail safes on any thing he left in the country

    Ch 180 Making Their Move
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    Getting a Technology System in Modern Day
    Sci-fi · Agent_047
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
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    No thanks for the chapter I hoped for a new spin, but you making a MC who is already strong and smart but then does the stupidest things he could do, this does not make sense, he could have not shared his status with them he does not need there help with his training, but you made him just another loser.

    Ch 1 Challenge
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    Arifureta: Dark Lord
    Anime & Comics · Eros_Lord
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
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    I thank you need to change his stats by lowering his IQ to maybe 3. You need to figure out if your making the MC someone how can take care of themselves or is going to go cry in a corner, right now you have him doing both and life don't work that way.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Legendary Shelter Survival Guide
    Fantasy · sahejRocks
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
    Commented

    Why does he not go and grind more coins you are handicapping the MC to make your story

    Ch 1 All-in-One System - First Ability
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    All-in-One System: All I Need is Erotic Coins
    Fantasy · Ryongul
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
    Commented

    Please just stop now no one wants to read about school life!

    Ch 30 Chapter 30 - School? I don't see this as a good experience.
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    A Highest Rank in Another World!
    Fantasy · IgorRSAWs
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
    Commented

    No one would just take a beating for no reason try harder author

    Ch 39 Convincing Family
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    My Doomsday farming truck
    Sci-fi · Deep_Sky
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  • Kingvio
    Kingvio1yr
    Commented

    This is very stupid of the mc and author

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 The Mutation Reagent
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    Doomsday Game: My Shelter Can Be Upgraded Infinitely
    Fantasy · Xuanting_Official
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