Kingvio
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Do you reread the chapters before you post them and think about how they fit and if anything in them is useless or doesn't make a lot of since. In the last chapter you have the MC say I'm going to use your body for science then he vaporizes him, ah what. Now your having him be like your bad Sky no experimenting on people how where going to kill us, are you maybe a secret writer for all those graphic novels that some one who was going to kill you can go free after they are beaten and beg for there lives, just for them to get back at you later. I mean the MC took wounder soldiers and turned them into his own killing weapons.
Why do these type of authors thank people need to explain there powers to others the other party it’s being like yes I’m a this and my powers are this and come from that just to get the others approval
No thanks for the chapter I hoped for a new spin, but you making a MC who is already strong and smart but then does the stupidest things he could do, this does not make sense, he could have not shared his status with them he does not need there help with his training, but you made him just another loser.