Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: New Begining

what a terrible chapter. using parents as emotional catalysts or character growth, or just drama is generic, cliche, and dull, etc. we are all numb to it. this is that point where you realize this story is another run of the mill fanfic that has nothing at all holding itself apart from the others. you had two very close friends that you. could of lost. that would of been shocking but any death after just comes off as forced after this. good try at least, its not bad.