Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Tech System

I wouldn't say perfect but a big improvement to that previous version. Even just the little tidbit you added of using a mutation as a cover to his ability to enhance himself as science made this edit worth it.

At least you go back and edit instead of just saying you'll do it.

Is "Scott Summers" brainwashed by "Sinister" here?

If you're willing to accept that you're a mutant, why didn't you awaken the x gene???

Nahh why are you bring this to mutan plot or i can say the boring plot

discombobulate

he fainted and that's when the stupidest thing happened.... with Xavier's nature there's no way he would lose the opportunity to see his memories when he fainted and when he was with Hank it was impossible not to take a little of his blood lol

Nah associating with the X-men just ruined his reputation and will now be watched 1000000x more from hydra, shield, magneto, etc…. Literally you only did this because you wanted mutant girls for the MC and if that’s not the reason then it’s just horrible writing.

Nice chapter

looser mc

Fights scenes are lacking but other than that it’s alright overall. Also how does he know wing chun? Makes zero sense that he’s able to do more than react even with the intelligence modifiers.

Thanks for the chapter ! 😁 👍

gracias por el capitulo

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the read :)