Comments of chapter undefined of Marvel: Tech System
Marvel: Tech System
Unknown_To_All
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Please author, I'm here in your novel because of Jean, tell me that she will be a love interest? I wouldn't even care if it was just her. Pls, pls, pls.
Unknown_To_All:Jk I’m still deciding on whether just one girl or two girls and am trying to see how it fits in the story. I’m already confident in keeping Gwen since I like her a lot and every seems too as well but it’s also true that their are lots of other characters that never get attention in fan fics. So I’m probably going to fill in that second spot with a character that’s not too used in romances. At one point I even thought of making Cortana a body and making her the second 😂 but this is a marvel fic so the main cast should at least stay marvel in my opinion but that doesn’t mean I won’t introduce characters like Cortana.
You don't just have 38 million in your checking account and say: ah... cool. You need an account manager for your company, a personal account manager, you need an office, customer support, employees to do stuff, even him needs to do updates or at least check for logs or possible complaints, legal team, etc. The bare bone details of him basically just: The Company! and having it on his phone is a joke. It basically takes all the effort you write into trying to make this "Sci-Fi logical" and just negates it. AT LEAST have him realize it: Look for an up and coming someone that can be the CEO: Here salary, here company, Go CEOit. Company not going public, etc. It could be that easy, fill out a ton of holes in the way he does things in one paragraph.
