TalesByJaz
This is last chapter I have read of this Fanfic.I am doing this because you forgot that you were writing Fanfic not creating your own novel. Believe me there are far more better novel out there, I can read instead of wasting my time here.
your foreshadowing sucks. we already know what's going to happen. there is no mystery in this story now. you screwed that up already.
You are telling me the elf he bonded with wouldn’t immediately go to him? Seriously
the last 21 chapters could have been put into a few chapters
the author should seriously just kill himself. trash writing
the last paragraph is like a chat gpt story
Bloody phone book would have the address if he had a name.
man it really turned out exactly like that hpxmarvel fanfic where the fem harry became death's avatar
Thanks for chapter
I thank you for the chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.
