Learn_FasterThanMc
Author, ur plot , choosen timeline , system use..is too good.. But i think there is problem in ur writing way..i understand tht writting a story, or plot is difficult..as i know some time i also tried but chod diya vich me.. But bro missing essence tht i think is tht u r not building tht characters, how the party grow..u r skipping these parts. U r just telling story from one person view..and sometime it is bit problem too understand year, or time But in whtever way u will write, i will read every one of ur chapter..