Comments of chapter undefined of The Enlightened One (Senju!SI)
The Enlightened One (Senju!SI)
Kakukami
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ShifuLongLv3ShifuLong
You made the beginning of the chapter too dramatic, in one chapter you make him complain about not having talent and in another chapter you make him cry with fear for having talent.
GaiaLv5Gaia
In the Naruto World, especially in Konoha, if you are born as an ordinary civilian who has no chakra or little chakra then you can be said to be quite lucky and can choose the path of trading or writing novels there. However if you are a civilian, have chakra, and are in an orphanage. So, just pray that you won't be noticed by Danzo, especially if you are close to Rookie 9. If you are noticed by him then you can be sure that you will be in the Bad End because Danzo will make you soulless husks with his training.
TranshumanistLv14Transhumanist
MBS_41Lv1MBS_41
InfinityWolfS2Lv2InfinityWolfS2
