Comments of chapter undefined of Reincarnated in the Astral World

I agree with everyone, you closed their relationship in a way it makes sense and there is no need to make her a V. Like how can even she be a V since she gave birth 2 times? And like the other comment said, it would make Draven be right about Aria, that she used him, while she is not someone like that and wanted to give him a chance. For me that closure is made in the best way possible. That mean Aria still can have her first true love and a hood husband, and I think I know a guy... Great chap, thanks!

The story makes the most sence the way it is currently written. There is a logical series of events. Making her still have her V-card would just prove Draven right that all she wanted was kids and she didn't even try for a relationship. The way it is currently Aria is in the right and Draven is acting like a spoiled man child. Just my opinion.

Thanks for the chapter . I think🤔....I'm the one that said about the spell thing . I don't like stories that break a good relationship for wi n cest . if there is no love between parents it is easier to accept the green hat of the father, that's why i made that suggestion. I like your approach in the story . So consider readers opinions but do what you feels right for the story.

thx for chap

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Honestly, I don't like how Draven's story is going. This goes the route of L*st Knight where all the men except the MC are disgusting. I think this approach is very unpleasant and looks forced. I think it would be better if Aria and Draven could just part as friends without making Draven so disgusting that it feels incredibly forced. PS: I’m afraid of the appearance next to Arthur of such disgusting characters as Lucien’s older sister, Eve, who created all this horror in the land of the elves, and then it was all shown as something justified and fair.

the Story is going in good way.....keep up author....😁

I think how you have it now makes the best sense. Your awesome keep up the great work.

Thanks for the chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

Such a question. When is the next chapter of LK?

im kinda indifferent to this particular issue. I dont put that much importance on Aria being a virgin. It would be nice but not enough for me personally to do something like retconning or writing around it