Comments of chapter undefined of The Accidental Liberator (SI ASOIAF,GOT ) Rewriting

the story is great so far, well written but still not a 10/10 because i can't stand the MC the only reason the story remains good is because i know the MC will grown up but right now he is an everyday normal person thrown in the asoiaf world and he needs to adapt to the world and needs to learn to adapt to his powers, to his goals and adapt his scrawny body and mind to one of a warrior.

The chapter was good but i am kinda on the edge with MC using his powers willy-nilly and the other people around him accepting it quite easily. I don't know maybe because it is Essos as they are much accepting as they have the warlock of qarth, Asshai and the shadowlands and valyria is also somewhere near that area.

I’ll try to keep reading this… but this isn’t my kind of mc

Captivating[img=recommend],fascinating[img=nervous],asking for more [img=update]

it's so much better than the first version where they are both kidnapped if I remember correctly

El MC se comporta como un niño y se hace ver muy simple y quién en su sano juicio permite que alguien documente sus habilidades cuando estas son su as bajo la manga es demasiado iluso necesita un golpe de realidad urgente

thanks for the chapter

Me gusta,un protagonista "apasionado"

love the story so far

Thanks for the chapter

Dothraki will be…..

Story 10/10 , updated 3/10