TheDanza
TFTC man, and why did you have to next him like that, man he wasn't even that strong to begin with, as his actions would have a butterfly effect thus half of his advantages would be lost, now you do this. he'll compared to all the cheat like powers his was above average at best, now it is average.
What I think people don't like too, and me personally is that you didn't just do this right from the start, you could've made it like this from the beginning so that we don't jave to read about the god nerfing him, that way it would feel more organic, you say it's a loophole the last chapter but it feels more like a nerf.
TheDanza:Thanks, I really appreciate your help. I went and changed my story a little and used a version of your cooldown idea, so thanks again for that. I really liked it.