Comments of chapter undefined of Percy Jackson: Son of Hades - Prince of the Underworld

It was good. As long as the monsters have connection to Greek Mythology their addition to the fic will not seem jarring. Thanks for the chapter!

You could probably use some monsters from Danmachi

Great chapter, loved the Greek mythology for the hydra vine. Although just a word of warning, not all of the monsters you find in D&D will work with the Greek setting. Just don't get discouraged if this happens, it's an amazing story and can't wait for more.

A suggestion is that the MC improves his darkness and other powers, for example: swords, chains, constructions of darkness or an armor that he creates on his body which he can change the size of. It is similar to the darkness of Meliodas from Nanatsu no. taiza another thing is that darkness is mass that can generate gravity like the black-bearded yami yami from one piece. As for the earth, he could control the sub arts of the earth like in the world of Avatar the Last Airbender. The souls could be used like Big Mom from One Piece does, and last but not least the bones could be used as kimimaro from Naruto's Clam Kaguya.

Hum...

I'm kinda glad Grover is actually doing his job here, some of the PJO en HoO fanfics I've read just seemed to focus on the Main Character(s) and forget about (or ignore) him during this part of the story.

When can we expect his first spoil of war?

Cool new monster, thanks for the great chapter

TFTC

Ty :)

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapther

Thanks for the chapter

Good job. Please continue

TFTC

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chp