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Monarch_Ruler
Monarch_RulerLv4Monarch_Ruler

I don't know why most authors do this, but you should know that jinwo wasn't chosen by architect, ashborn himself choose him. the rulers have used cup of reincarnation many times and ashborn have seen many people , you think if a new person entered suddenly he won't notice. if ashborn just wanted a vessel for his entry on earth then maybe the person who completed the double dungeon can become his vessel, but he wanted a successor , he chooses jinwo because he was always fighting death while being the weakest , it's pure nonsense that completeing double dungeon can make you his vessel, the existence of double dungeon in the raid was because jinwo was a part of the team. this logic of getting shadow monarch power just ruined the whole story

Slime_king
Slime_kingAuthorSlime_king

😁😁😁

Monarch_Ruler:okay, sorry I didn't read the chapter before comment, the author know how to play his Card
Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2Arnab_Panday

There are many loop holes in this chapter. Like: when did he get points? What is his hunter rank? How did the Rulers didn't notice his existence? Why didn't Jin asked his rank? Most of all, how will he get the system? We all know the test was especially for Jin, if he passed he would get power and if failed he would die. Why would Ashborn choose the MC? There are many more but I will refrain from saying them. Why you might ask? Because I liked this fanfic. I hope the author will edit them or make the future chapters better.

Arnab_Panday
Arnab_PandayLv2Arnab_Panday

MacKenzie_50943
MacKenzie_50943Lv14MacKenzie_50943

thanks for the chapter 😊

Anonny_Anonymous
Anonny_AnonymousLv1Anonny_Anonymous

Akira is a fine name. But paired with Wilson? Ridiculous.

Aye_itz_cloudz
Aye_itz_cloudzLv14Aye_itz_cloudz

Thxs for the chap