Comments of chapter undefined of The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

Not sure how to feel about another OC being added when you're already going to collect women in other worlds. And while a half-Dullahan is interesting, it's not something you'd expect from the not that low-key blood purist Great King Faction. You're writing is great so far, please don't bog down the story with a pokemon harem.

Man, you forgot about Misla Bael.. don't forget about the mommy man, she is too good. I get that there are many girls, but instead of cutting down to 15, set it to 20 and leave it at that. Thing is, he is also building a peerage, so if they are hot girls, it would feel bad if they were left out. My take on large harems is that it depends on how long you spend on developing them. So far it's balanced, and the framework is also suited to slice of life for that purpose. Official Canon events start in 6 years, so you have time to write it however you wish. Numbers don't make it Pokemon, what does, is lack of developments. You can have a 3 girl harem and still pokemon or a 30 girl with neither being useless. It all depends on you, so don't let yourself be bogged down by numbers, and focus on the girls you like adding. If you have fun with writing, it will all feel good in the end.

You updated the chapter without the baptism

Don't know why you had to add an OC when there's so many women in DxD already.

I don't think the great king faction will allow a half blood devil as future lady Bael.

Thanks for the chapter.

I swear that the only undead that can have children in any world is vampire and dullahan is like one of the most dead undead so this just doesn’t make sense to me also…didn’t you say that he planned his baptism to happen before his party? also you had said that he moved his birthday party so that he could see Rias at her party but he skipped it anyway….author, you need to be fore of this plot holes and unexplained changes om his plans because as stuff like this builds up, us reader get more frustraed and annoyed till we just end up dropping it

Thanks for the chapter! Is the mc going to marvel?

20 and add Sona

No pongas a isse mujer y pon a misla bael... Se me hace asquesoro que este isse mujer en el harem

I'm honestly surprised how you guys manage to remember all these names blud is collecting them like Pokemons at this point

keep it up I love this story please.

nice chapter

20 sigh another disappointment tthe 4 or 5 i think they were the best tbh but another dxd with ash gotta catch'em All As It's Mc I Wish There Be A Dxd With Small Harem 3 Or 4 But Nope Drop.

Me sorprende que la facción del gran Rey traté como pareja a una mestiza siendo tan tradicionalistas pero no con eso digo que está mal en realidad se ve bueno el OC y además no tenes que preocuparte tanto por la parte de números de parejas lo que tenes que preocuparte es de darle voz y desarrollo porque haciendo eso no será un harén pokemon, estas por buen camino seguí así

Thanks for chaps

Va a conseguir nobleza de otro mundo con su segundo juego de piezas porque si es así esdeath de akame gakill es una buena inversión y las tribus las podrías usar para tu armadura