B0mbaCl0ck
Man of true culture. Master at the Dao of Pussiology and Harems. Heir of Wincester.
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Honestly, the novel is quite boring. It has some interesting parts, but overall, it's really boring and frustrating. Some of the tags are just for show, like the romance and harem, while MC is kinda pathetic, without any real depth to him. He mostly bluffs his way out of situations, and relies on external means without any real power of his own.
To give a pathetic reason to reject it. It doesn't matter anyway, since even if harem, there's no scene or proper development.
Well, in reality, anyone can cheat regardless of reasons. And i like Harem genre, so i'm hoping the hot girls will be with MC. To each their own.
Bro, isn't he at nascent soul? How did he even hide it?...
Haven't seen anything yet. Half the novel is written with AI.
They have the same stats.. How can they be so blown out of proportion? Do stats even matter anymore?
Much too soon. It was literally few chaps ahead, and apparently even 500 chaps later they haven't reunited. Forgotten char in trash novel in the end.
Yeah i spoke too soon. Got worried for a bit, but i'll trust your ways.
I really like your novel since it suits my kinks. My gripe is with avoiding cliches, where everyone goes on their way instead of trying to be together, like many authors do. Other than that, i don't really have much to add. You're doing good and i enjoy reading it. Even the MC shows growth. Keep it up.
This was the most boring thing i have ever seen. Stop dragging things out for the purpose of dragging them out. You really used AI to generate the chapter just to drag it out? man.. write your own content, i skipped most of this worthless chapter. It really doesn't add anything but annoyance.. I feel like your first thought is how to drag everything further, and you even use AI trash to do it..