Comments of chapter undefined of The Knight of Ruin(DxD)

I'm behind the Idea of making an OC for the new marriage, like the other guy suggested a Devil with a demonic ice trait though it'll be kinda similar to Serafall so maybe black ice while giving it other properties? would be fun seeing ezdeath with her original personality in the mix which could also be an excuse as to why she hasn't married

let me get this straight sirzech had his gremory lineage dominant that's why he had more reserves than romonus at birth and became a super devil much sooner than romonus but romonus has his bael lineage dominant so it will take him more time to become a super devil than sirzech but his POD at super devil will be much stronger than sirzechs at the same level🤔🤔

A good development, with a new Fiance on the way... Though, don't tell me he will be engaged to Seekvaira next? I'm not sure she's that suitable tbh, kind of a neet otaku. There aren't any others in the young generation who train and are talented, aside from Sona and Rias. I wonder whom he will get engaged with .

Thanks for the chapter.

The gift in my opinion was very abrupt, there is no reason for the MC to deserve it, it is like simply giving it because yes, it would have been better for the MC to receive it after having caused an action that caused enormous chaos, a huge one, like reveal some scandal from the underworld, for example the truth behind the criminal Kuroka, corruption, human experimentation for super devils (the latter not directly but it is understood), the extinction of the nekotama, without him being explicitly involved, of anonymously, that makes the Shinto faction declare war on the demons and expel them from the city of Japan that they had dominion, and there has to be a huge procedure to stop the war, that would be enormous chaos, so the The reward would be deserved and it would be worth it for the god to have his eye hurt.

I don’t know how to feel about roygun, because she rely too much on king pieces. She have no motivation to train at all that’s why she took a shortcut and agree to use the king pieces. Beside king pieces cannot be remove from the host or they will die, moreover once ajuka knows about this, he will kill all those who use the king pieces, ajuka will never allow them to live. Sure roygun have strong bloodline and abilites, but in my opinion the moment she accept and use king pieces is the moment she give up on training, give up her motivation to get stronger and use shortcut just for fame. I don’t know how to feel when she became one of mc wives, because i don’t think she’s pass the criteria for mc wives.

So far the story is interesting and does not have many errors, which could be solved with a little editing and the story would improve in quality, congratulations author, what I would recommend would be that you not tell your father about your relationship with your mother or brother, remaining a secret, perhaps he could tell it centuries later when he is already the strongest and got his mother pregnant and the divorce issue has completely cooled down, thus avoiding unnecessary drama if he tells it in a few years when it is still hot As for divorce, would you add in puberty the trait that makes demons demons like senses enhanced too many times that I suggested in previous chapters and delve into the sin that everyone has that you mentioned?, in addition to making the mc abandon his human morality and act more like a demon, taking what he wants because he can, and things like that, which would please the god of madness and wants chaos. You could make it so that just as his boss, the god, seems to be able to throw a bone to the mc, which would be like a gift for causing chaos, he could also sanction him if he doesn't cause it, which would help change the mc's way of acting, and not think that his boss is benevolent and is truly a mad god.

author thanks for the chapter but I remind you that the first top rategames are case ultimate and the king pieces improve those who use it but not to such an extent that they skip almost 2 class ranks so roygun should not be only an upper class if not ultimate class thanks for the chapter author we hope for more

nice chapter

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Thanks for the Chapter

I like Long chapters like these keep it up Arthur good work 👍

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Gran capitulo

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