Comments of chapter undefined of DC: System Shock (COMPLETED)

The ending is entertaining. Personally I am disappointed that I didn't get to see Multiverse elements in the story. On a side note, I wonder who is more powerful Grayson Whitlock or Micah Foster. All in all, a good story

Me the entire chapter….

Is it the true ending or the end of the future Micah's??

well that was entertaining but overall a solid 3/10 as far as ending go. I'm assuming author just got bored of the novel because that was basically just dropping the novel but writing a rushed ending so you can claim the novel is complete.

Dang, the story's ended already? I wish it could've gone on a bit longer, but thanks for the story!

Wow, did not expect it the story to end with emo darkseid singing 😭 Looking forward to whatever you got coming next tho author

The ending is good the epilogue bit specifically. The metron bit was a little boring and having the story end this early is disappointing so I’m a little annoyed with this abrupt end. hope u do something like this but without rushing it or moving the story forward with no planning.

at Ch71, been stockpiling them up for a binge, so I'll do that soon, just wanted to say this was fantastic, and I'm looking forward to reading the pile I've got left to read, do you think you could upload a chapter with all of his stats and such at the end? That'd be nice. Anyways, congratulations on completing this story, and I'll be eagerly watching what you do next, maybe a Marvel, or Naruto story? I think you'd do well in those verses.

3 more chapter and you could've had a perfect 100 😭😭😭

I'm disappointed to see how the story went but I'm glad u finished it

Thanks for the chapter and this terrific story ☺️👍👍. Looking forward to reading 📖 the next new book.

oh man what a surprise man. thank you author for this enjoying work. hope to see more from you

Is the story over yet? hahaha I'm lost

It’s been a fun ride and cheers to the author for the privilege to read their work!

for real

Another disappointment just like with gray whitlock

TYSMFTC

Loved the story, wish there could've been more but overall pleased you were able to bring it to an acceptable end. 😌👍