Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: An SI's POV

I truly don't like the world of Harry Potter changing without his influence. You can add stuff ee didn't see, flesh the world out etc, you can even change the story to include his existence, but nothing else. It feels too contrived to change things out of that scope. You could do anything, no matter how wacky. You also messed a bit already. Prophecy's and riddles of the future are fine, but what you have done is moe rhe characters in the world more like N.P.C'S. Fate and Destiny are terrible plot devices. Up there with amnesia, and the orphan trope in the cliche department. Free will needs to be the centerpiece of any story. This makes the characters real, therfore making the world feel real.