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Comments of chapter undefined of Dead Man Walking: Living By Day, Dead By Night

easyread
easyreadLv11easyread

A small bit of advice: This would be much easier to read if the paragraphs weren't so large. Your writing and grammar are much better than most I find here, but cutting the paragraphs into smaller sizes will be beneficial. You don't have to listen to my advice, but it's something I learned a while ago.

Lord_immer
Lord_immerLv3Lord_immer

I like his personality and if someone say that they dint like his personality go and read some other novel its not made for you author let him be this cold its rare to seee a real mc most mc dont have the balls ti do the necessary to survive

HaremSoul
HaremSoulLv3HaremSoul

I don't know to like this mc or not...but I wait until more chapter to fully understand his unstable emotion before I say anything seen right now he show a personality that I'm not quite fond. Also, Thanks for the chapter.

DigDig
DigDigLv2DigDig

Well, thank for the chapter as always.

Yorgan
YorganLv12Yorgan

First i was Wow, than i saw this is wrote by Zent and i was Wow Wow, time to read it.