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Comments of chapter undefined of Mistaken Identity || Star Wars Fic

ptbv
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where is the holocron ? with all this fighting he should be damage

world_domination
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it's described by one Sith Lord to a group of two acolytes journeying with him about their misconceptions about the dark side the difference between anger and hate or fear and desperation he said anger will make you strong enhance you but hate will corrupt you harm you make you unable to think for yourself and become a slave to your own emotion and then he told them fear will keep you Sharp alert keep you from becoming arrogant but desperation will make you lesser prone to foolish decisions quick action in the worst way and will always keep you from moving forward ... he wanted to acolytes to be true Sith not just people who gets mad and throw some lightning lol

Tyr203
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Thanks for the chapter 🌚🌝

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Brezer
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that was a great chapter

Microraptor
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thanks for the chapter

Daoist96s1k6
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Thanks for the chapters. As always, here are questions and ideas that came to me. -You could make him stay until the end of the clone wars as a jedi, you could do it for example by having him change the jedi records and say that he comes from a world with a jedi temple and that he was trained there, you could also have him change his age at 19 or 20 instead of 15 so it seems more believable that he became a jedi knight and was promoted to knight after the battle of Geonosis for the losses he suffered, so in addition to continuing his training as an ARC he could also do other training available such as admiral, espionage and counter-espionage, pilot of all types of vehicles, explorer, politics, economics etc... you could also make him learn or improve the sciences and all types of knowledge available and exploit the fact of being a jedi in the republic, in the meantime during the war could become more ruthless and logical and make him understand that difficult choices must be made as well as making him an expert tactician and leader. -For his personality, I hope that you make him remain an anti-hero as I said a few chapters ago and that he doesn't help everyone who comes within his range but that he first thinks about himself, about the situation and if it's convenient, if you make him remain as a Jedi during the war could make him understand that if you have power you can do practically anything you want. -If, as written before, he remains as a Jedi, you could in the meantime have him prepare everything he might need in secret, you could also use Aurra Sing for this and yes, I know he can't trust us, you could have him invent a kind of chip or use the mechu- deru to control or influence the biocomputer and therefore its loyalty or at least not to make it betray. - He could have Aurra prepare a powerful ship with everything, equipment, you could also use it to recruit trainers for him for example Mandalorians who could train him in their own ways as well as perhaps making him join one of their clans in order to also learn how to create their armor and obtain one, he could learn from the various elite units and fighters around the galaxy, learn the Teräs Käsi, learn skills from the Matukai, learn Echani, arrange his fake death or if you can make them become the sui loyal soldiers organize the fake death of his legion. -For his skills with the force and his training you could have him go for example to Mygeeto as an infiltrator and while he is there be taken by the force to a secret place where he could find a Holocron of Darth Plagueis with all his knowledge, like this he could also learn dark side skills from a teacher with more knowledge than Sidious (for now). - For his bloodline and I know you probably already decided you could give him the bloodlines Dathomirian Zabraks (for double heart and dark side), Gen'Dai (for regeneration, senses and lifespan), Arkanian (for their intelligence and their infrared spectrum vision), Duinuogwuin (for the ability to survive in a vacuum), Chagrian (for radiation resistance), Devaronian (for the double liver, poison resistance, immunity to fire and resistance to extremely high temperatures), Pantoran (for their resistance to extremely low temperatures), Chiss (for their metabolism and their ability to stay in excellent shape), Yarkora (for their redundancy of organs in order to survive longer easily), Mirialan (for their flexibility, agility and reflexes), Shi'ido (for their extremely flexible physiology, shape-shifting ability, their denser bones and supply of flesh to change appearance which also goes well with Gen'Dai regeneration ), Nautolan (for the ability to breathe underwater), Yuuzhan Vong (for their tough skin, their stronger physiology, their height, their weight, their absence in the strength that you can make so that they can activate and deactivate) and of course humans to maintain the human appearance, you could say that these bloodlines and abilities have been locked through

Darth_Ullyses
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Granville4554
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Thanks for the chapter 🙏 🙂 😊 🙌