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Comments of chapter undefined of Golden Ascension (Fate AU)

FallenInnocence
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Davinci-chan when

Grafian
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Honestly the whole simpery thing he has going on is annoying to read. Especially when he has Castoria as a cuddle pillow, but doesn't seem to see her in any kind of romantic light. Rin hasn't even introduced herself as a Magus, while in his territory, and clearly intends to seduce him because of the infinite gems he can provide. Basically, a gold digger. Sion wants his research and knowledge. The Clocktower girls really depends on who they are, presumably Olga and someone I couldn't pinpoint. Olga, incapable of the family magecraft, is basically a throwaway pawn by her family in the hopes of tying Marcus to them, so she herself could certainly be a sympathetic character, the other girls so far aren't. Especially when his Servants have no ties to this world but him, they have no ulterior motives and have genuinely come to care for him. Him being head over heels for some gold diggers just doesn't make sense. While your DxD fic with a similar protag was very Gary Stu-ish, I certainly preferred his temperament and character.

YoungMonarch
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Well I do hope that his saber faces get attention before the others but I think you will do good regales.

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Marcus: "I can't stand gold diggers, they won't get to me, even less so when what they want is my important alchemy!" Also Marcus: *inmediatly turns into a yes man and starts simping after getting a single look at them, completely ignoring the servants that had been with him for at least a year* Yeah, have to say, even if this is a harem, I just can't stand how he went from 0 to 100 as a simp, especially when he knows they are literal gold diggers, there either for his alchemy or what he can do with it

DREAMER_18
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DREAMER_18
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Brother please.....

DREAMER_18
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ABOVE_HAVENES
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ch???

DREAMER_18
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Brother updates please 🙏🙏🙏

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Dogramagra
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Gustavo_Mendes
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mano tem tanta coisa que eu quero falar, porra o protagonista tem mais de 300 anos porra, ele esta sendo facilmente manipulado, e nenhuma de suas servas avisou ele , ela são servas pelo amor de deus, e ainda por cima são mulheres, elas deveriam saber logo de cara que ele ta sendo manipulado, e ela ta sendo um simp, o protagonista da fanfic do ATG não tem mais do que 30 anos e ele sabe se esta sendo manipulado ou não, e enquanto esse protagonista te mais de 300 anos e esta se fazendo de idiota ,mano que decepção.

LeficiosTV
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Thanks for the chapter.

After_Wing
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If anyone can't tell. Author here is using Sion Eltnam Sokaris from Fate/Grand Order. The original from Tsukihime and Melty Blood is named Sion Eltnam Atlasia. Here, this is Sion from FGO. MC got some good taste indeed for twin-tails and beautiful legs!

Grand_reader
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Thanks for the chapter

Affe_Te
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Beautiful

Davka_76
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thanks for the chapter

david200
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thescorpiona
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tftc!

OverkillBills
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Thx