Comments of chapter undefined of I Have A Lifespan System
I Have A Lifespan System
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So much running away.... either give him stuff he can fight or stop focusing on violent encounters. the book is boring if all he does is run from or decimate his enemies and being over powered is better than being a coward
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with all this being said it not like you are a bad author. I would say you have alot of talent. It just everyone has room for improvement
_EverSmile:You're right. I will keep that in mind.