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it was stated ( by the system) earlier that he learned the movement technique easier because of "his dedication to marshal arts"
no she didn't. she said mid stage
wasn't she in snake form
that's because societies that don't tend to crumble
logically speaking it should be the other way around
only 2 paragraphs ago he had 180,000 MP
unless your name is Luccas then you get 23 levels overnight will spending all your time doing a ritual to find something without doing anything at all to actually obtain xp
there is no way.... why was he stuck at lvl 10 if he could hace left it behind utterly ridiculous
hiw douse it roar?
Rosewood was the surname
Who is Roya?
The most successful writers in history were not "mainstream". It isn't jarring to read it's only slightly abnormal. Doing something because it's " mainstream" is a bad reason to do something, it steps the story of it character.
why? the book is written in the present tense the current tense is correct
Purely objectively you are correct but the problem is that from the readers perspective the moment he sees allot of enemies he runs away. And you may tell us he knows he can't win but that power he rarely truly conveyed to the reader. you should try to help your reader see the enemies strength some before he has to run so its not on sight all the time.
No Author seems to have simply jammed it in with the rock gambling skill