Comments of chapter undefined of I Have A Lifespan System
I Have A Lifespan System
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So much running away.... either give him stuff he can fight or stop focusing on violent encounters. the book is boring if all he does is run from or decimate his enemies and being over powered is better than being a coward
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Purely objectively you are correct but the problem is that from the readers perspective the moment he sees allot of enemies he runs away. And you may tell us he knows he can't win but that power he rarely truly conveyed to the reader. you should try to help your reader see the enemies strength some before he has to run so its not on sight all the time.
_EverSmile:Can you define coward?He goes from being a trash to a genius archers, train to be a dual sword master, kill the three horsemen, beat Kenzo and his gang with those thugs who are in higher rank than him. In what way was he a coward?In the face of stronger foes, do you count retreat as being a coward?. Do you want him to win miraculous without the strength to back it up.Besides, everytime he retreated he came back way stronger than before.