Comments of chapter undefined of woke up in fallout 4 with Halo system
woke up in fallout 4 with Halo system
Shikizone
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A mechanic would be good, someone expert in field technology who would be vital for complex maintenance such as the Wharthog, possible UNCS bases or putting military vehicles into operation in the field, he may be a civilian but he would be a valuable resource in a world where everything is destroyed and broken. Another would be an intelligence marine with normal sniper aptitude, collecting data from the environment and eliminating threats such as enemy command figures.
Interesting idea for a story. I have a few comments about the story, first of all, I noticed that when you start a chapter and generally write in lower case and the name in capital letters, it's ok, but it's better that when you write, it should look something like this: My name is Artur Adams Watch Arthur. an no, i'm Arthur Adams. watching Arthur. Also, introducing two new characters was fine, but automatically accepting them into the sanctuary sucked because in Fallout anyone could betray you and no one was trusting so easily, only after a few months/days would they gain trust in him and not immediately shoot him. them and it's great. The protagonist should trust them only after a few days, not immediately. Sorry for any spelling error I use google translator to help .
Thank you for the new updated chapter. I loved it so far.Also, by the time the main protagonist levels up to more skills in his halo system. Will he do the same command structure the exact the same thing for the UNSC armed forces and including all the 6 branches like the army, navy, air force, marine corps, office of naval intelligence (ONI), and spartan operations???
