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Mr_Tarwan1mthCommentedits yen not yem :D
[Congratulations Host, From a Bronze Ticket, You have received: 1,000,000 yem (Common)]- Mr_Tarwan1mthReplied to Teritiusz_Teret
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My father was from one of the CIS countries, while my mother was from the USA. I knew three languages by the age of eighteen— Russian, English, and Polish. - Mr_Tarwan2mthCommented
Interesting idea for a story. I have a few comments about the story, first of all, I noticed that when you start a chapter and generally write in lower case and the name in capital letters, it's ok, but it's better that when you write, it should look something like this: My name is Artur Adams Watch Arthur. an no, i'm Arthur Adams. watching Arthur. Also, introducing two new characters was fine, but automatically accepting them into the sanctuary sucked because in Fallout anyone could betray you and no one was trusting so easily, only after a few months/days would they gain trust in him and not immediately shoot him. them and it's great. The protagonist should trust them only after a few days, not immediately. Sorry for any spelling error I use google translator to help .
Ch 2 Chapter 2: Project Puma - Mr_Tarwan2mthCommented
Where ?
[Hospital Image] - Mr_Tarwan2mthCommentedCh 1 Is it wrong to raid Grandpa's alcohol cabinet?
- Mr_Tarwan3mthCommentedCh 14 CH 13
- Mr_Tarwan5mthCommented
O widzę towarzysza polaka :D
Ramy kicked it off: "Mój dzień... starts with putting on clothes and eating breakfast, then I go to school and spend my day there before coming back home and playing games until the night. That's when I go to sleep." - Mr_Tarwan8mthCommentedCh 108 NOTICE
- Mr_Tarwan1yrCommented
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3)Azrael the Angel of DeathdetailReincarnated in Irregular at Magic Highschool with Chakra and MagicAnime & Comics · Just_for_fun1997 - Mr_Tarwan1yrCommented
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Tell me what you guys think.detailDimensional Group Chat as the Sorcerer Supreme (A Non-Harem Fan-Fic.)Anime & Comics · SlimeSage