Classics21
Love the chapter but im disapointed that you havent described dawn and also spoiled us her background and what happend between her and og ben jntil the end of the series. It would be good to know this and see how is MC going to address her in order to avoid her NTR and future drama
Thank you for the feedback; honestly, I didn't notice it at first, but after re-reading the chapter, I also think that the way I portrayed Dawn is a bit lacking. So, I was thinking of doing a revision later (like always). See, as I was writing the chapter earlier, I wanted to make their interaction sweet and lovely, like how Blue Dragon did. However, I can't copy-paste the canon considering the difference in the timeline. Second, my writing style is just different. Anyway, as I was saying, I wanted to make their interaction sweet, pure, yada-yada, but at the same time, I wanted to keep it as natural as possible.