Comments of chapter undefined of The Kingmaker: Legend of the Undefeated Commander
The Kingmaker: Legend of the Undefeated Commander
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reptarLv15reptar
This chapter contains conflict with the guild so he can leave it, why would it move to the prologue?
Wise_WeedAuthorWise_Weed
reptar:Ah, if it’s a side story it makes sense. But throwing it in right after introducing the AI makes sense as well. My thought process if this: [hello Samar, I am 143143 (can’t remember the AI name)] end chapter > follow up with current auxiliary > and then down the road 20-50 chapters Samar learns more about the mystery of the game and what not
SaphartlantisLv15Saphartlantis
I agree with the others, you've put too much information so far, it would be a shame to scrape all of it just to put this chapter as the Prologue, even with auxiliary chapters. People would think the auxiliary are spoiler chapters. If you do that, you'll need to re-explain everything with many flashbacks and wall texts, you risk having many new readers dropping it. The story have a good pace, don't cut it off. Plus those chapters gives us time to learn how Samar works, his talent and motivations, and why he decide to get kicked of his guild now. New readers would miss all his character progression.
TheHisagLv15TheHisag