NewComer714
this are all on patreon for 10$ a month and already there till 81. so the author had a choice of not torturing us like this cause we broke. the way the chaps are uploaded from one suspense to another, from causing excitement and expectation soon became frustrating and downright annoying. again the author and anyone might say that "you are reading this for free ,just stfu or gtfo" and they might be right to some extent but i cant help but write this.the repetitions is also not helping. anyways the author is a great writer, best of luck for the future man and hope u get the best!! ggwp!
the story was really good, it has a premise already tested and proven by another author who writes a very similar one, but this is getting very difficult to read. Not to mention the repetition that is constantly present in more than half of the chapter, please stop. How can you make a good story like the video game and another at this level? where is the writing you use on the other one??