NewComer714
Too much embellishment and not enough story. That's how the past two chapters felt to me. It's too detailed and way too posh for a novel's writing style. It would have worked on a book where you have more content available so you can just immerse yourself in the narrative, but when talking about a web novel that updates almost daily it just doesn't work well and leaves an unsatisfied feeling at the end, not in a good way either.