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Comments of chapter undefined of Tycoon Actor in Hollywood

Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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what the heck is happening from last 2 chapters

FennrrirX
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Too much embellishment and not enough story. That's how the past two chapters felt to me. It's too detailed and way too posh for a novel's writing style. It would have worked on a book where you have more content available so you can just immerse yourself in the narrative, but when talking about a web novel that updates almost daily it just doesn't work well and leaves an unsatisfied feeling at the end, not in a good way either.

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IMPAiLER
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and the chapter ended just like that......

Hyraken
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This chapter was like 1/4 of a complete chapter.😧 Please write normally and give us some progress last 2-3 chapters are like part of a bigger chapter.

_Sword_Immortal
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Maniacwolf
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Thanks for the chapter 👍

Insane_Fantasy
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tftc~~~○●

INDRA32
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Thanks for the chapther

Deisy_Marin
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AstroKid
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Thanks for the chapters!

Urekmazz
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antpeek
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OnlyGoodStuff_1
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Thanks for the chapter

WarMachine78
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Thanks for the chapter

MYTH_
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thanks for the chapter

Shahzar_Khan
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NOooooooooo i want more chapters moreeee

Grmr
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Thanks for the chapter. But why must it end like that ( ._.)