Comments of chapter undefined of JJK:God of Slaughter

Why couldn't you just put him in Toji's body instead of all this backstory that is unnecessary and hard to understand

I dont quite understand the father thing, is his father the god he killed or someone else?

you know it’s really annoying to have people reference things and people we have absolutley no way of knowing who or what it is. it’s like having a cliffhanger bit your story is just cliffhangers and we know nothing at all. so we just forget that this things are happening in the background and whenever his things happen they are just deus ex machinas. in the alternative we would have to waste time reading about how a god we know nothing about is doing things for a guy he only met once. I know that to explain a lot of the stuff we don’t know it would need a chapter of only exposition, but of course exposition is neded. if you don’t have it your readers won’t understand anything at all. like right now. you just have to introduce things slowly so that tou don’t need multiple chapters of exposition to expalin what is happening in one chapter. this story is already a mess and it has only been 2 chapters.

I skip all the backstory 🤣

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Wow I wonder who proofread this amazing job 😝💅