Comments of chapter undefined of Among Giants: Starting with Mamba Mentality (NBA Pack System)

author, i think you are trying to pace yourself too much.. the chapters sometimes don't have meaning.. i get that it won't have everytime because you need to set up, but reprising events from real life will hardly get any excitement if Javi isn't majorly involved.. the rookie challenge was great because we saw the MC be active, but there's a few chapters where the story seems to go backwards instead.. i just ask to build on the storylines better, not just telling events..